Aw hell

I thought I knew it all... You're a genius; I filled a 100 page notebook with this golden information. And yes, hentai is the key to absolutely every frame of an animation. I'm going to make my award winning blue flash right now.

You must make a part 3.

Nicely done, a bit under expectation though.

Definitely an improvement in artwork compared to last submission. Animation was way under my expectation because all that's going on is a dragon rubbing it's big scaly cock on a girl with nothing showing :C

Also, if you right click and press 'Forward' four times, you'll discover a different version of the dragon. ;)

Overall - Bad

( Good Features )

- N/A

( Bad Features )

- The drawing is horrible and looked like it came from MS Paint
- The animation wasn't very good looking
- Too bland for any entertainment to be going on
- Overall has an extreme lack of effort

( What You Could Improve On )

- The drawings
- The animation
- The length
- The effort
- The boringness

( Overall )

I give you a 2/10 for the lack of effort, and do believe that you can do better. I recommend that you add voices and maybe look at some good art tutorials or books to really catch the viewer's eye and give them an idea of what to expect in the future and get you more views. I also think that you might want to look at the tutorials here on Newgrounds to make it a little interactive so the viewer is kept busy and hopefully entertained. Also, I think that you may want to joint the characters to make them move more realistically. Good luck on improvement!

~ The-X-Button
( Good Features )

- N/A

( Bad Features )

- The drawing is horrible and looked like it came from MS Paint
- The animation was choppy and wasn't very realistic
- There wasn't much action taking place, and left me bored

( What You Could Improve On )

- The drawings
- The animation
- The storyline
- The attention-grabbing

( Overall )

I give you a 1/10 for the lack of effort, and do believe that you can do better. I recommend that you add voices and maybe look at some good art tutorials or books to really catch the viewer's eye and give them an idea of what to expect in the future and get you more views. I also think that you might want to look at the tutorials here on Newgrounds to make it a little interactive so the viewer is kept busy and hopefully entertained. Also, I think that you may want to joint the characters to make them move more realistically. Good luck on improvement!

~ The-X-Button
( Good Features )

- N/A

( Bad Features )

- The drawing is horrible and looked like it came from MS Paint
- The animation was choppy and wasn't very realistic
- There wasn't much action taking place, and left me bored

( What You Could Improve On )

- The drawings
- The animation
- The storyline
- The attention-grabbing

( Overall )

I give you a 2/10 for the extreme lack of effort, and think that the drawings are the biggest problem. I recommend looking at some of the drawing tutorials here on Newgrounds or there are some great books out there. I also think that, considering the blockyness of the drawing, you drew slowly. Here's a pointer; when you're using a tablet, you have to visualize the line you want to make and quickly draw it for smooth looking work. Otherwise, the animation wasn't very well done, and there are again some great how-to's out there and they can be very helpful. Also, the plot was a little bland and didn't really entertain me, and I don't really think anyone else will be. Well, that's about it. Good luck on improving!

~ The-X-Button

Overall - Awesome

( Good Features )

- Character design
- Weapon + item design
- Working battle system
- Creative secret medals
- Working shop
- Difficulty choosing
- Multiple attacks to choose from
- Fitting music
- Summoning
- Those little bubbles that express emotion when hit or when you get a victory
- Art gallery :3

( Bad Features ~ Things To Improve On )

- No weapon shop
- The bosses are kind of hard because of their massive health
- Limited money, so not much you can really stock up on because of large prices on things like Max Ether
- Some parts aren't really original, like the Bomb-Omb
- No different staffs for the girl to make certain magic more powerful
- No save system
- Censored tentacle rape :C

( Overall )

I'm giving you a 9/10 simply because this is the best turn-based RPG on
Newgrounds. The character design was excellent, and so were the weapon and item designs. I really liked how the secret achievements were kind of hard to get, and especially liked the pervert achievement. I still think that this can get better, and hope you take some of my features into consideration; I really would like this to stay #1 top rated, because it really deserves it. Please upgrade it as soon as possible; I'm sure that we're all waiting for it!

~ The-X-Button

MARTH IS... G-G-GA-G-GAY?!?!?!

HOLY SHITZIDOODLES, THAT'S NEWS TO ME!

I liked the art and stoof. Really nice job.

What is that?

There is no way to win or lose, you don't tell how to play, and the pictures are just plain horrible. I suggest that you make ways to actually play a game before you say it's done.