The-X-Button's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[How I got my tablet]

Overall - Bad

( Good Features )

- N/A

( Bad Features )

- The drawing is horrible and looked like it came from MS Paint
- The animation wasn't very good looking
- Too bland for any entertainment to be going on
- Overall has an extreme lack of effort

( What You Could Improve On )

- The drawings
- The animation
- The length
- The effort
- The boringness

( Overall )

I give you a 2/10 for the lack of effort, and do believe that you can do better. I recommend that you add voices and maybe look at some good art tutorials or books to really catch the viewer's eye and give them an idea of what to expect in the future and get you more views. I also think that you might want to look at the tutorials here on Newgrounds to make it a little interactive so the viewer is kept busy and hopefully entertained. Also, I think that you may want to joint the characters to make them move more realistically. Good luck on improvement!

~ The-X-Button
( Good Features )

- N/A

( Bad Features )

- The drawing is horrible and looked like it came from MS Paint
- The animation was choppy and wasn't very realistic
- There wasn't much action taking place, and left me bored

( What You Could Improve On )

- The drawings
- The animation
- The storyline
- The attention-grabbing

( Overall )

I give you a 1/10 for the lack of effort, and do believe that you can do better. I recommend that you add voices and maybe look at some good art tutorials or books to really catch the viewer's eye and give them an idea of what to expect in the future and get you more views. I also think that you might want to look at the tutorials here on Newgrounds to make it a little interactive so the viewer is kept busy and hopefully entertained. Also, I think that you may want to joint the characters to make them move more realistically. Good luck on improvement!

~ The-X-Button
( Good Features )

- N/A

( Bad Features )

- The drawing is horrible and looked like it came from MS Paint
- The animation was choppy and wasn't very realistic
- There wasn't much action taking place, and left me bored

( What You Could Improve On )

- The drawings
- The animation
- The storyline
- The attention-grabbing

( Overall )

I give you a 2/10 for the extreme lack of effort, and think that the drawings are the biggest problem. I recommend looking at some of the drawing tutorials here on Newgrounds or there are some great books out there. I also think that, considering the blockyness of the drawing, you drew slowly. Here's a pointer; when you're using a tablet, you have to visualize the line you want to make and quickly draw it for smooth looking work. Otherwise, the animation wasn't very well done, and there are again some great how-to's out there and they can be very helpful. Also, the plot was a little bland and didn't really entertain me, and I don't really think anyone else will be. Well, that's about it. Good luck on improving!

~ The-X-Button

[Swat Massacre Ep. 1]

Overall - Bad

( Good Features )

- N/A

( Bad Features )

- The drawing is horrible and looked like it came from MS Paint
- The animation was choppy and wasn't very realistic
- There wasn't much action taking place, and left me bored

( What You Could Improve On )

- The drawings
- The animation
- The storyline
- The attention-grabbing

( Overall )

I give you a 1/10 for the lack of effort, and do believe that you can do better. I recommend that you add voices and maybe look at some good art tutorials or books to really catch the viewer's eye and give them an idea of what to expect in the future and get you more views. I also think that you might want to look at the tutorials here on Newgrounds to make it a little interactive so the viewer is kept busy and hopefully entertained. Also, I think that you may want to joint the characters to make them move more realistically. Good luck on improvement!

~ The-X-Button

[There she is!!!]

I can't stop watching this series.

It's just as great every time! Never gets old! I can enjoy it again and again! This series just awestruck me, and now it has almost became a daily chore to watch it again. Great work on everything, you have my full support!

[There She Is!! final step]

I loved the series.

You are great, I love the anime style of the expressions and characters. That is the best Flash video I've seen on here yet.

[LL - Movies]

I love it.

It reminds me of some of the people I grew up around... good times. The voice acting was great, the animation was smooth, the illustrations were awesome, everything was really good! I'm going to look at some more of your videos now, because this really made my day.

[If you seek...]

Your work is to envy.

I am extremely impressed with what you have done here! The drawings were striking, the animations were great, it reminded me of a scene of an actual movie! I really enjoyed this, please make more!

[Biker Road Rage]

That was okay...

I really don't think you took enough time into trying to make it look like it wasn't made in MS Paint. Please be aware that when people are looking for a good Flash animation, they want good graphics to go with it. Otherwise, the animation was pretty good, especially for a beginner.

hanman917 responds:

Thanks for the constructive criticism. I am still learning things about flash. I will keep working and try to improve.

[8-BIT Waterslide]

Amazing.

Possibly the best stop-motion film I have ever seen! The animation was surprisingly smooth, and I loved your water effects. I hope to see more things like this from you in the future!